nice art concept, a very well written description, and a easily simple and unqiue art design with spetacular weaponry. you could be abit more specific on strength, a tad bit more, how strong can her power overthrow someone. Personality wise, how dose she function emotionaly. She looks like a very curious being, that never knows there limit. And tends to get in trouble alot. While saving the world.
Character design are easy to manage but more indepth touch ups can make a character easily more (NTERESTING) but i can't knock you for the effort put into this, a great start on the character so thats a plus. Dig more deeper into story
Trust me, i failed to attempt deeper stories than you'll ever know. Another thing to keep in mind is that maybe a story about an existing adventure can give viewers a taste of the person. But thats just my view.
Good job and very sexy drawing you have there! Interesting name as well!